It's 2am and I lay awake, discovering the depth of night.
The raccoon finds a shiny thing and skitters away to clean it.
A lone drake sits sadly at the picnic table, casting wishes in the pond.
Are you out there?
I miss the feel of your arms,
breath on my neck,
moments of bliss.
This is my first, modest attempt at G-Man's Friday Flash 55.
Very nice words. Had a great feel to it.
ReplyDeletePheromone Girl...?
ReplyDeleteYou just made me smile.
WOW!!! What an excellent 55...
I could tell you had talent, but you just blew me away.
Thank you so very much for sharing this little Gem with us.
Please join us again same time, same channel next week OK.
Have a Marvelous Week-End.....Galen
Wow, muy bien! Did you take this picture?
ReplyDeleteWOW! And the picture is lovely also.
ReplyDeleteLove it! And the photo is very cool too. :)
ReplyDeleteA romantic 55 that is open. I don't know if it is temporary sad or on going sad. But well done
ReplyDeleteBravo!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
I'm impressed... : )
...looking forward to your next one.
xoxo
I don't even know what Friday Flash 55 is, but sounds good to me!
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! I love the image of the drake casting wishes!
ReplyDeleteYou are so talented; I love this dreamy side of you. The pic's cool, too!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great Flash Fiction 55! I hope you keep doing them. It's not an easy task is it? I tried one once and it was very difficult. I'm doing one for this Friday coming up. I love the photo too. Did you snap it? I can't take photos at night at all.
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